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What Went Wrong? by ~darktranquility1984:icondarktranquility1984:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


My Heart Has Turned To Stone,
My Soul Has Turned Black,
I Wish To Walk In The Shadows Alone,
Where I Cannot Be Seen,
My Body Lifeless,
My Breath Taken Away,
My Mind Is Full Of Demons,
I Do Not Wish To Live Like This Anymore,
My Heat Was In Love,
My Soul Was As Pure As A Newborn Child,
I Used To Walk In The Light,
Where The Rays Of The Sun Hit Me,
My Body Was Clean,
My Lungs Were Full Of Fresh Air,
My Mind Was Full Of Happiness

So What Went Wrong?
©2005-2008 ~darktranquility1984
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Submitted: February 7, 2005
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a poem about myself

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~celestial-elevator:iconcelestial-elevator: Feb 7, 2005, 5:41:31 AM
:hug. sometimes life slides of the path we want it to go :hug: a well written poem :cuddle:

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Celeste

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~celestial-elevator:iconcelestial-elevator: Feb 7, 2005, 5:41:43 AM
:hug: sometimes life slides of the path we want it to go :hug: a well written poem :cuddle:

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Celeste

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~darktranquility1984:icondarktranquility1984: Feb 7, 2005, 5:47:58 AM
thank you... :-D i totaly agree... but what decisions we make.. thats the real answer to all questions

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May The Darkness Within My Soul Grant Me Tranquility
~celestial-elevator:iconcelestial-elevator: Feb 7, 2005, 5:56:00 AM
Not always..sometimes things just go wrong. but I understand what you mean.

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Celeste

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~YoukoKtulu:iconYoukoKtulu: Feb 11, 2005, 7:22:10 PM
I feel the same way...good poem

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